Too dark, too many people in the background, model not looking at camera, tree is at a bad angle
Brighter, photo is more in proportion, model smiling at camera gives off a friendly mode of address, folder/lanyard shows a study atmosphere, as does the building in the background (looks like a school environment)
Not as good, model not looking at camera
Natural-looking photo, too much of a close-up for a contents page
Very natural-student-looking picture, can still see the school building and the other mise-en-scene such as the books, lanyards and scenery
Other people too close to the models, bright light on roof makes it look bad
Model is too off-centre, the focus is more on the school than on her
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